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Monday, February 04, 2013

Lost

This is my attempt at writing a short story for a course I'm currently enrolled in... Your thoughts and insight in to the story are most welcome...

“Promise me that you will love her?”
He couldn’t speak for his grief had paralysed his tongue still. There were only tears as he tried to keep his eyes wide open as he took mental snap shots of the few moments he had left with her. He finally nodded to her plea.
“Promise me Scott! Promise me! I want to hear you say it!”
“I promise, Mohini...”
“You and this baby are most important people to ever come in to my life. I love you so much! Nothing can ever change that.”
“I know... I love you too...”
 Barely able to keep her eyes open, Mohini started to close her eyes. Every breath she took thereafter became shallower and more laboured. Her grip of Scott’s hand was losing vigour but Scott held her hand tighter with every passing second. As an eerie silence crept into the room, her skin grew pale with pallor under the moon light from the window just above the head of the bed. He kept staring at her face, wiping off tears she had cried while mumbling words of comfort in her ear.
The doctor walked in with an awkward stance, knowing of the dilemma he was about to face.
“Mr Richards? We need to do some paper work and... We need to move Mrs Richards from this room.” He uttered these words with much fear as he was young and the only physician for miles in the rural town of Trinco. As Scott turned to address him, he noticed a soupcon of shame in his face. It was clear to him that he was only an intern. With the two nurses at his aid, there was only so much that he could have done. He didn’t understand why he wasn’t angry with the staff or why he felt so numb.
“What time is it?” he asked the man wearing the white coat, who was shivering with guilt as he started to tear. Scott could see that he was simply not capable enough to deal with his situation.
“It’s been 5 hours since... Mrs Richards... passed away...” stammered the medical intern, he appeared as distort as Scott, as it was evident that it was his first unaccompanied experience with death. Scott stood up from the chair as it screeched and kissed Mohini’s forehead. At that moment there were only tears, his eyes closed for what seemed to him like seconds, lasted minutes. Her hand was no longer a fugitive of his. Scott turned away and walked out of the room, denying his urge to turn back and embrace his wife. He found a chair by the corridor where the lights flickered possibly due to the bad condition of the clinic itself. By the dark corridor, Scott found himself completely broken. He felt an intense emptiness in his gut, with so much pain. He knew not where it was coming from but he was aching for the one person, he would never feel again. As he sat in the crippled chair, with his legs up against his chest and his face immersed against his thighs there continued to be only silence. Enraged for a moment, he threw himself back against the wall, hammering his occiput against the crumbling partition.
Sobs were starting to fill the stillness and he embraced himself in a fetal position, as he tried to console himself by rocking himself to a potential peace. Footsteps had suddenly sneaked up on him from the aisle, it was the midwife who aided in the delivery of his child. As Scott looked up, he saw a bundle of blue cloth cradled against the women.
“Sir, would you like to hold your baby?”
Emerging from beneath his fingers, barely clearing his nostrils he glanced at the women and said “What!?” in a rather loud irritable tone. She was barely able to comprehend him, his voice muffled by his blocked nose due to the tears.
“Sir, this is Baby Richards. We are ready to discharge her to you...”
“Ok” is all he said. As the baby was placed in his arms, there was barely any emotion painted on his face. He stared at her for a while before a single tear trickled down his cheek. He finally got up and started to walk towards the exit of the clinic. He placed his baby in the infant seat of his car while he had constant flashbacks of how he and Mohini picked up baby furniture. For a moment there was a hope of a smile on his face. As he sat down in his car and started the engine, all he could think of is how to deal with the future. He finally began to drive home with little passion for what could be. He stared at the road while driving, but ever so consumed with so much thought. He thought of all the things that meant so much to him, back home. All the things that would remind him of her and the life they planned on living.
To his dismay, he ran a red light at the intersection and suddenly all he saw was bright lights engaging him from the rear. The car was thrown off the street to be entwined around a light post and for only a minute were there mourns, sounds of a crying baby and barely audible pleas for help. Within moments there was stillness, all life that was in the car was no more. Only smoke escaped the rubble that seemed to gush out blood steadily to form a pool on the graveled road.
The truck involved in the accident didn’t stop to aid the passengers of the car. A middle aged driver who reeked of beer and cigar smoke woke up from his half drunk slumber at that very moment of the accident. The adrenaline didn’t make him think clearly and he was far from making any sound decisions. He could feel his heart beat violently, almost like it needed to escape his chest. Afraid of the repercussions he continued to drive, unknowing of the grave consequence he was about to face as a result.
A few miles ahead of the truck, a woman emerges from the woods surrounding the poorly lit up road. Dressed in white and hair so long and dark, she seemed peacefully at bliss. But she was pale as if all her blood was drained out of her slender body. And she was holding a baby in her arms who was as quiet and motionless as a plastic doll.
She whispered to the baby, “Don’t worry sweetie, you’re going to be just fine. Soon you, your Daddy and I are going to be very happy together.”
Within seconds the trucker approached in his partly bruised truck. The headlights were not structurally intact and scarcely glimmered any light. He could barely see the road and as he approached the woman holding the neonate. He saw her in the middle of the road taking little notice of the truck racing toward her. With little time to react, he hit the brakes so hard that the truck almost toppled and only came to rest in front of her with mere inches to spare. He found his foot partly bruised against the brake pedal due to this endeavor. It only then came to his attention of the bruise on his forehead from the accident that occurred moments ago. He was distort, especially after the accident and still afraid of the consequences of the hit and run. After stopping the truck, he immediately got out of the vehicle to see if the lady was alright. As he opened his door, the woman just stood there in front of his door.
“I need to get to the hospital right away, my baby is not breathing... She’s not breathing!”
“Ok ok ma’am! Get in, I’ll take you to the closest one!”
They got into the truck and he immediately started driving toward the nearest clinic which would unfortunately take him back to the site of the accident.  Maybe it was his heightened senses but the bloke became suspicious of the young woman. She was no longer anxious or worried, as if all she wanted to do was just get into the truck. She kept rocking her baby to sleep, comforting her with a lullaby...
“So ma’am, is your baby alright now?”
“NOOOOO!” she screamed in a hollow voice. Her words were loud and cold, he felt frozen in his seat, afraid of what she might do next. She no longer seemed as brittle as she initially did, she seemed calm yet engaged with much hatred and anger. Attempting to take the conversation in another direction and possibly soothe the woman’s probable distress, he decided to ask her a few questions.
“So... Hmmmm... Ma’am? What’s your name?”
She turned towards him and smiled, like she felt sorry for the poor bugger. The smile was dark and drooling with eager vengeance.
“My name is Mohini...”

By  Yoshith Perera

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